I mentioned in my last post that Neely had written her first story. It was not long before Halloween. I wrote down the words for her as she dictated them to me, and after that I reread each page for her as she illustrated. (I tried to keep up and write it word for word, occasionally spelling certain words to account for her cute pronunciation-like "Ghostez" for example)
I sewed the pages together when she finished, and took a picture of each page to post here.
It's called"Ghostez and Bats Going on a Picnic With Neely and Mama"(FYI-I spelled "Ghosts" normally for a lot of the book because I was hurrying to keep up, but keep in mind, it is always definitely "ghostez")
Page 1-"one day, there was some ghostez and bats. And there were some girls and one boy. There was a boy named Cason, and the big girl was mama, and the girl who was 7 was Paige, and the little girl was Neely and she was 3."
Page 2-Then the ghosts asked 'Hey! Do you want to go to a picnic?'
Us: "Sure." (She had a change of mind here) "Sorry, we can't, my mama has to clean. But we sure could come to the park."
Ghost: "That's where our picnic is! At the park!"
Page 3-"The bat got to the picnic as fast as he could and then said 'I got to the picnic as fast as I could.' Cason said 'Me and mama and Neely got to here as fast as we could, too.'"
Page 4-"So the back of the bells were very far away..." (no idea what she was talking about here to be honest) "...and we said 'we have to go home now. Bye.'"
Page 5-"Then Cason and Neely said 'Yay, we're home now' and Reed said that too. Then the ghosts came too and the bat named 'Charlie Cha Cha' said 'You wanna have a sleepover?' and the ghosts said 'of COURSE we want to have a sleepover!'"
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